Lindsay - from Co2BL

This was...quite unenjoyable.

The story could have been great. However, I never once connected to any of the characters. I couldn't even picture them because there weren't descriptions.

I never believed that there was a connection between Sarah and Tariq. She was indifferent to him, nervous because he was the owner of the company he worked for, but I never got the impression that she was even remotely attracted to him. As for Tariq, he flatly hated Sarah. From the first moment he met her, he hated her. Again, I never felt like he was actually attracted to her. The first time they had sex, I had to go back to read it because I thought I missed something and couldn't figure out how him being rude to her led to them having sex.

My other issue was that throughout the whole book, I was being told what happened. I never once felt like I was immersed in the story.